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My Rose

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I think it's very good... do you like it?
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It's very good.
I have a suggestion though: near the top petals, there are lines outlining them. Lines like that are usually used in more cartoony and illustration drawings. I'm assuming this is a still life/realism drawing, so they shouldn't be there. The illusion of those lines can be replaced by giving contrast between one leaf and another. If you have a file where the image for this rose is located, you can run it through a photo editing software to make it black and white. There you can see the exact tones that are giving the illusion of lines and make the end drawing much more realistic. ^^